I have 2 questions about my story. please answer, i havent had many answers for my questions lately?

It is a good idea and would be very readable although you do have some typing errors there. I like the fact that you have chosen an Inuit word for the bear's name as it does show a level of research that many on this site fail to achieve. I suggest you print it off and read it out loud or get someone to read it to you and you will hear the things that need changing. The story so far flows well so keep at it. Good luck with your story.